I have always wanted to buy a mustang when I will be an adult, because it is a very beautiful car and I will need it when I´ll have my job.
Another place that I've always wanted to visit is New York because I want to know the general culture of this city. Also I have always wanted to learn how to drive, because I would like to transport by myself and without help, because I am a very independent person.
Finally I have always wanted to go to the moon in the future, because I want to know all of this big star; I think I will get a lot of things that the people dont know and I suposse that this adventure will be very interesting and funny.
I just hope that all of my dreams could come true because I have always wanted to tell this adventures to my grandchildren.
HELLO STEFANIE, YOUR COMPOSITION COULD BE BETTER; FIRST, YOU CAN USE MORE PUNCTUATION SIGNS, IF YOU FOLLOW MY ADVICE YOUR COMPOSITION WILL BE PERFECT. AH!!! THE MOON ISN'T A STAR IS A SATELLITE!!!, BYE.
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